[dpdk-dev] doc: fix link bonding pmd typo in prog guide
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fix one typo and a grammatical mistake.
Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding")
Signed-off-by: Zhiyong Yang <zhiyong.yang@intel.com>
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doc/guides/prog_guide/link_bonding_poll_mode_drv_lib.rst | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
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> fix one typo and a grammatical mistake.
>
> Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding")
> Signed-off-by: Zhiyong Yang <zhiyong.yang@intel.com>
First thing the git check log spit this error out so can you please just make these changes
Running git check log on HEAD~1: 32787
======================================
Wrong headline lowercase:
doc: fix link bonding pmd typo in prog guide Wrong tag:
^^^^
Upper case PMD
Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding") Wrong 'Fixes' reference:
Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding")
^^
Insert a space..... Fixes: b0152b1b40fe ("doc: update bonding")
Is it candidate for Cc: stable@dpdk.org backport?
If it is Cc: the stable mailing list in the commit message body
I don't think this is really an error but put a space between Fixes
And Signed -off-by
> Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding")
> Signed-off-by: Zhiyong Yang <zhiyong.yang@intel.com>
<...>
>
> The Link Bonding PMD library(librte_pmd_bond) supports bonding of groups of
> ``rte_eth_dev`` ports of the same speed and duplex to
> provide -similar the capabilities to that found in Linux bonding driver to allow the
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
"to provide the similar capabilities" sounds better to me
> +the capabilities similar to that found in Linux bonding driver to allow
> +the
> aggregation of multiple (slave) NICs into a single logical interface between a
> server and a switch. The new bonded PMD will then process these interfaces
> based on the mode of operation specified to provide support for features such
Once this has been changed you can include my Ack in the next version of the patch.
Acked-by: Marko Kovacevic <marko.kovacevic@intel.com>
Thanks Marko,
Fix the issues according to your comments.
V2 has been sent out.
Thanks
Zhiyong
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kovacevic, Marko
> Sent: Friday, January 12, 2018 5:37 PM
> To: Yang, Zhiyong <zhiyong.yang@intel.com>; dev@dpdk.org
> Cc: Mcnamara, John <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
> Subject: RE: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH] doc: fix link bonding pmd typo in prog guide
>
> > fix one typo and a grammatical mistake.
> >
> > Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding")
> > Signed-off-by: Zhiyong Yang <zhiyong.yang@intel.com>
>
> First thing the git check log spit this error out so can you please just make
> these changes
>
> Running git check log on HEAD~1: 32787
> ======================================
> Wrong headline lowercase:
> doc: fix link bonding pmd typo in prog guide Wrong tag:
> ^^^^
> Upper case PMD
>
> Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding") Wrong 'Fixes' reference:
> Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding")
> ^^
> Insert a space..... Fixes: b0152b1b40fe ("doc: update bonding")
>
> Is it candidate for Cc: stable@dpdk.org backport?
> If it is Cc: the stable mailing list in the commit message body
>
> I don't think this is really an error but put a space between Fixes And Signed -
> off-by
>
> > Fixes: b0152b1b40fe("doc: update bonding")
> > Signed-off-by: Zhiyong Yang <zhiyong.yang@intel.com>
>
>
> <...>
>
> >
> > The Link Bonding PMD library(librte_pmd_bond) supports bonding of
> > groups of ``rte_eth_dev`` ports of the same speed and duplex to
> > provide -similar the capabilities to that found in Linux bonding
> > driver to allow the
> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> "to provide the similar capabilities" sounds better to me
>
> > +the capabilities similar to that found in Linux bonding driver to
> > +allow the
> > aggregation of multiple (slave) NICs into a single logical interface
> > between a server and a switch. The new bonded PMD will then process
> > these interfaces based on the mode of operation specified to provide
> > support for features such
>
> Once this has been changed you can include my Ack in the next version of
> the patch.
>
> Acked-by: Marko Kovacevic <marko.kovacevic@intel.com>
Actually just one more change it would be better as "similar capabilities" instead of "the similar capabilities"
The Link Bonding PMD library(librte_pmd_bond) supports bonding of groups of
``rte_eth_dev`` ports of the same speed and duplex to provide
similar capabilities to that found in Linux bonding driver to allow the
aggregation of multiple (slave) NICs into a single logical interface between a
server and a switch. The new bonded PMD will then process these interfaces
based on the mode of operation specified to provide support for features such
Marko K.
Thanks, V3 will be coming soon.
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kovacevic, Marko
> Sent: Monday, January 15, 2018 7:22 PM
> To: Yang, Zhiyong <zhiyong.yang@intel.com>; dev@dpdk.org
> Cc: Mcnamara, John <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
> Subject: RE: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH] doc: fix link bonding pmd typo in prog guide
>
> Actually just one more change it would be better as "similar capabilities"
> instead of "the similar capabilities"
>
> The Link Bonding PMD library(librte_pmd_bond) supports bonding of groups
> of ``rte_eth_dev`` ports of the same speed and duplex to provide similar
> capabilities to that found in Linux bonding driver to allow the aggregation of
> multiple (slave) NICs into a single logical interface between a server and a
> switch. The new bonded PMD will then process these interfaces based on
> the mode of operation specified to provide support for features such
>
> Marko K.
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Link Bonding Poll Mode Driver Library
In addition to Poll Mode Drivers (PMDs) for physical and virtual hardware,
DPDK also includes a pure-software library that
-allows physical PMD's to be bonded together to create a single logical PMD.
+allows physical PMDs to be bonded together to create a single logical PMD.
.. figure:: img/bond-overview.*
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ allows physical PMD's to be bonded together to create a single logical PMD.
The Link Bonding PMD library(librte_pmd_bond) supports bonding of groups of
``rte_eth_dev`` ports of the same speed and duplex to provide
-similar the capabilities to that found in Linux bonding driver to allow the
+the capabilities similar to that found in Linux bonding driver to allow the
aggregation of multiple (slave) NICs into a single logical interface between a
server and a switch. The new bonded PMD will then process these interfaces
based on the mode of operation specified to provide support for features such